Borad Room Essay

Amanda Grzybowski

January 11 , 2012

Broad Room Essay

Quite, small, and solar vacuums... everyone would love one. It's great for old people, no backs hurting and no loud sounds. People don't want to rile up the whole street with loud vacuums. Just think of the old people or people that have problems with their backs and need to clean the rugs, you don't want them to break their backs and have more problems with there backs. So I think it would be great to put this on the after 3:00 pm news for the old people.

Your rating will go over the bars with Solar Vacuums. Solar Vacuums are so amazing for everyone lazy people, sick people, and old people. Even kids could do this it's very easy so everyone would want it at this point. How could you not put this on the after 3:00 pm news!

It's very easy. All you need to do is click one little button and its on, how easy. You don't even need batteries for it, it's charged by the sun. No batteries that means no money going to batteries anymore. Just put it in the sun.

It's like way better than other vacuums. It's so small that it could fit in any space, even under your living room chair. No handles needed and no pushing at all. You guys could use it too and will love it!!! A clean office is a happy office.

For every purchase you make $20.35 will be sent to cure breast cancer. So if you put this on after 3:00 pm news, breast cancer will make so so much money. Don't you want to cure breast cancer. Look at it this way, for every purchase you make breast cancer gets $20.35. So put this on the after the 3:00 pm news.

Commercial

My commercial was very fun. I got to go to my friends house to do the commercial, and it took us more than five times to finally get it right. It was kind of really easy to remember my parts , I got mixed up a lot but that much. But it was really fun

Smoothalistic Hair

Get this the new hair conditioner that really works! But it just doesn't just get your hair smooth it makes your hair nice and silky with no tangles at all! Just $45.75 and it may be a lot but just think you get silky smooth relaxing hair that everyone would want. So you know the price now so you promble are like for get this but wait if you buy it now you get $10.00 off how great is that and wait till you here this its Katy Perry's and Selena Gomez's favorite hair supplie. Right now is the best time to go and get your silky smooth hair now with a purchase of a free purse. So buy now!!!!!!!!!

Family Tadition Past Down

A family tadition past down is we always get the family together on chrismas eve like my cousins, grandma's and grandpa's, anuts and uncles. Then we eat together and just get together.

about me

Hello my name is Amanda. I love animals, I have lots of cats and one dog Daisy, one turtle Courage, one huge fat hamster Cupcake, and fish and shrimps!! I also love love love running. In spring I would like to do track, and next year im doing cross country again. I like horror movies too. I mostly love your hair to me it looks like a candy caine!! :) I also like having you as a teacher!!!!

Holiday Traditions

My holiday tradition for Thanksgiving is, my parents and I go to my grandma Cathy's house at 1:00 and have Thanksgiving dinner. But when it gets to 6:00 or 6:30 we start to leave to go to my other grandma and grandpa's house, and have Thanksgiving dinner again!  After that I'm  stuffed!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Daisy's Shot "Narrative"

Amanda Grzybowski Daisy's Shot

November 4, 2011

6-B

“Get off you big baby” I shout at my six year old chocolate lab named Daisy. Daisy was sitting on my lap waiting to get out of the car and go into Petco but she had no clue why she was going there. The reason she was going there is because she is getting a shot.

When we got out Daisy ran right inside of the store with my mom dragging behind “ Oh my gosh” I say in such an annoying way but I kept going. When we got closer and closer to the line for the shot and I smelled a smell I never smelled in a long time. It was the smell of thousands of dogs barking, crying, sleeping, and maybe going to the bathroom. As we stood in line Daisy was so happy that she was somewhere other then house that she was shedding and crying so much that everyone was staring at her.

After a few minutes a lady that worked there gave me a free chocolate lab calendar and I said “ thank you so much” with a big smile. I looked at the back and the pictures were so cute especially the one of a chocolate lab with headphones on it was so cute.

Through painful hours of waiting with smelly cute but some mean dogs in a long line thank goodness we were next.

Just looking at the table the dog has to go on I say “oh my god” in my head. How is my fat dog Daisy suppose to get up there, not even five people could get Daisy on that table. But then they just gave her the shot on the ground. It went by so fast and it didn't even look painful to her or me.
After that we looked around and around forever just for fun and I just loved watching the birds play and run and fly around. But my mom said we had to go now, so we walked out with Daisy.

When we got home I thought Daisy would run and be barking and wanting a bone. She still wanted the bone I got for her but after that Daisy found a spot to lay down in and went to sleep. And that was the end for her today. Lets just hope she doesn't need another shot anytime soon.